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    Tyrannus's Magic

    Tyrannus
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    Completed Tyrannus's Magic

    Post by Tyrannus Mon 18 Jan 2016, 7:44 pm

    Name of Magic; Descendent of the Titan: Tyrannus
    Type/Subtype of Magic; Offensive
    Current Rank; X
    Description; Channeling power from the Titan known as Tyrannus, the decedents of this Titan are hard as metal, capable of sprouting extra arms as their ancestor had. A master of this magic may unleash devastating salvos, appear stronger than gods, and more resilient than life itself.
    Information;
    STRENGTHS:

    * Massive Increases to Strength, Endurance, and Magic Defense
    * Multiplicative Damage Out Put from Extra Limbs.
    * Massive Terrain Destroying Techniques

    WEAKNESSES:
    * Friendly fire prone
    * Berserker Status Ailment Prone
    * Long Range Attacks are more draining than the short range.
    * Primary method of damage is close range.

    Traits;
    Titan’s Lineage: Tryton’s body has become hard like metal, as such all-physical attacks are reduced by 50%, unless the attacks are Metal enhanced. Magical attacks are reduced by 35% regardless of element.

    Tyrannus’s Limbs: At will Tryton may sprout up to 3 sets of arms in addition to his own. As long as all arms are deployed. A-S rank spells can be used. All the limbs move as if they were organically apart of the body capable of independent movement and functionality like he was born with them. The arms hold no cooldown as they are manifestations of his actual power.

    Berserker’s Might: During combat, if Tryton falls below 50% health or takes 25% or more of his health in damage. For 3 Posts, He gains +30% Strength, +25% Agility, +30% Magic Defense. During this temporary buff, he is filled with rage becoming obsessed with destroying his foe. Allies become targets if they get in his way or he deems them taking his fight.

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    Tyrannus
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    Completed Re: Tyrannus's Magic

    Post by Tyrannus Thu 21 Jan 2016, 8:26 am

    Bump
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    Completed Re: Tyrannus's Magic

    Post by Kenshin Sun 24 Jan 2016, 8:05 pm

    Heyo Tyrannus, just letting you know that this app is not yet complete, you need to have 4 D-rank spells not 3, give a bump when you are done and I will review it
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    Completed Re: Tyrannus's Magic

    Post by Tyrannus Mon 25 Jan 2016, 2:18 pm

    Bump it up!
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    Completed Re: Tyrannus's Magic

    Post by Tyrannus Tue 26 Jan 2016, 8:14 pm

    Bummmmmp
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    Completed Re: Tyrannus's Magic

    Post by Kenshin Wed 27 Jan 2016, 4:04 am

    Heyo, could you please put all of your spells in spoilers by rank (so all D-ranks in one, C-ranks in another, and so on and so forth), I forgot to mention that before, sorry for that
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    Completed Re: Tyrannus's Magic

    Post by Tyrannus Wed 27 Jan 2016, 8:39 am

    Fixed,

    Let me know how I can put titles in the spoiler, I couldnt find it in the BBC Guide
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    Completed Re: Tyrannus's Magic

    Post by Kenshin Wed 27 Jan 2016, 5:44 pm

    Umm, when you click on the spoiler button (the little notepad with the yellow sign) it comes up with the spoiler title, you type the title into that
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    Completed Re: Tyrannus's Magic

    Post by Kazul Wed 27 Jan 2016, 10:15 pm

    Tyrannus wrote:Name of Magic; Descendent of the Titan: Tyrannus<-No exact hint on a certain Magic it is or can do.
    Type/Subtype of Magic; Offensive<-This needs to be a type of magic, not it's specialty. Ex: Caster, Holder, Re-quip, etc.
    Current Rank; X
    Description; Channeling power from the Titan known as Tyrannus, the decedents of this Titan are hard as metal, capable of sprouting extra arms as their ancestor had. A master of this magic may unleash devastating salvos, appear stronger than gods, and more resilient than life itself.This description is invalid. Assuming this is a caster magic, you can not depend on another being for magic when caster's magic description is gaining magic from your own self. Furthermore, this magic bluntly being said to be stronger than Gods, and more resilient than life itself is not allowed and coming off as extremely overpowered. If you can give a good reason why this magic also obtains extra limbs, then sure I can buy it. But right now it's vague and I'm wondering what type of magic this is, to get you to be more resilient than life itself, as hard as metal, and sprouting extra arms. Please explain more, and either way you can't keep both of those, especially the resilient than life part.Overall, this description will need serious tweaking and adjustments to match the criteria of caster magic(if this is what it is) or any sort of magic, and not come off as overpowering. Your magic has no theme, it's extremely vague and needs a set type of magic it sticks too, you don't see characters from the show able to manipulate magic itself into doing things outside of their magic set.
    Information;
    STRENGTHS:

    * Massive Increases to Strength, Endurance, and Magic Defense
    * Multiplicative Damage Out Put from Extra Limbs.<-If these are extra limbs, then I would understand why each act as your usual arm and such. However, having multiplicative damage from ONE limb won't be tolerated.
    * Massive Terrain Destroying Techniques

    WEAKNESSES:
    * Friendly fire prone
    * Berserker Status Ailment Prone
    * Long Range Attacks are more draining than the short range.
    * Primary method of damage is close range.

    Traits;
    Titan’s Lineage: Tryton’s body has become hard like metal, as such all-physical attacks are reduced by 50%, unless the attacks are Metal enhanced. Magical attacks are reduced by 35% regardless of element.<-This isn't going to be allowed. Up to 50% physical attack reduction? First of all, why does he obtain this metal like body? What sort of magic gives this off? The title of this magic doesn't exactly hint at any exact thing, at this point I feel as if you're just trying to vague it out and get vast amount of power from it. Not tolerating it. And also, this ultimate defense will not be allowed with that extreme close range power you have at all, it's one or the other it can't be both to a GOOD extent. Magical attacks being reduced as well I can understand due to your body being made of metal, however that has to be scaled down A TON.

    Tyrannus’s Limbs: At will Tryton may sprout up to 3 sets of arms in addition to his own. As long as all arms are deployed. A-S rank spells can be used. All the limbs move as if they were organically apart of the body capable of independent movement and functionality like he was born with them. The arms hold no cooldown as they are manifestations of his actual power.<-3 Sets of arms is a no go. That's 6 arms in total(excluding pre-existing arms) able to use any rank of spells with, 6 arms that have independent movement therefore can be abused with having a toppling ultimate defense in many directions and no limitations, And 6 arms with NO COOLDOWNS!?!? And I can't believe the reason why, the description was vague and not very much for such power for me to see why you get this, including the fact this is too much overpowering abilities just for traits, and needs to be majorly changed.

    Berserker’s Might: During combat, if Tryton falls below 50% health or takes 25% or more of his health in damage. For 3 Posts, He gains +30% Strength, +25% Agility, +30% Magic Defense. During this temporary buff, he is filled with rage becoming obsessed with destroying his foe. Allies become targets if they get in his way or he deems them taking his fight.<-No stat boost allowed for traits allowed whatsoever. Including as such he gains ridiculous boosts.

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    Basically man, this app needs MAJOR work. The numbers here are just too great, and logic needs to be severely placed here, ESPECIALLY for the D rank spells that can do things like an A rank. Just change this, find a theme for your magic, not something vague to try and manipulate power itself because that's just unfair, stick to it too. But this needs help, harsh to say but the truth. Sorry.

    P.S. Each spell including information at the top needs at least 3 strengths AND weaknesses. Thank you.

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